Friday, February 5, 2010
Octo and Ruby: construction and creative ideas
This is a drawing for my buddy Luz. She's also an art student and I promised her a drawing a while back to basically beat my own ass into learning more. What I'm looking for is a critique on my construction, I plan to redraw and colour it so it looks good, but I need ideas on:
1) How is my construction? I know that she's a "stylized" character but I tried to draw her really round. If you think it's bad is there any thing I can do to make it better?
2) Is there anything can do to make the pose clearer or more interesting?
3) Finally, is there anything at all I can do about the composition? It looks fine to me, but I'm more worried about what others will say. I don't want to give Luz a gift and visitors to her home wonder to themselves, "Why does she have crap on her walls? She should clean up after that dog."
Leave your critiques in the comments.